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I wrote this. No rhyme. And these are my thoughts. I'm saying I know I'm clearly classified as Goth. Uhm … I know the poem can be a little sad. Even told me. I know. Thanks in advance. Can you fall faster than before and even land on your feet? Can you stand tall, strong and happy, without shedding a tear? Is there such a thing, he wondered, as a beautiful disaster? This girl is smiling but at the same time, she is crying. complete as it may seem, the inside is broken. Will there ever be a way to repair a broken heart? The cure for There is even a life destroyed? She has many questions, so little time for the pieces of your heart is being torn apart inside.
Hi, thanks for writing I do not know whether to look at all this, I will not be presumptous, but just in case you do not mind here are my thoughts: a couple of changes you might consider (S = Strophe L = line): S3 L3: Consider leaving the word "be" S6: This kind of sounds like a country song. You may want to write again. I'm being sarcastic. Beyond that read well for me. Those were only my thoughts to do with them whatever you want.
